Friday, 14 June 2013
Part 2
To continue on the last post, after dinner the night navigation section of the exercise began. By this point, a rugby injury to my knee I had sustained had began to act up, conveniently when we had to march 5 kilometres to the next training area for the night exercise. As twilight set in, I gritted my teeth against the pain and made it to the final event for the day. We began to navigate to our points in the pitch dark through farmers fields, looking for everything from dead trees to hay bails. For me who navigated early in the rotation, this exercise consisted of me trailing at the rear, consistently stopping, taking a knee, and keeping an eye out for "threats" through the scope of my weapon. This lasted for hours as the head navigator attempted to locate a black sign in the dark, one of our last points. Craving water and sleep, we pressed on looking for this sign in the dark of the night. To our joy at around 1 am we saw our pickup on the way. We had done enough to reach the forces standard for navigation, now we were headed back to base for the most joyous moment that can be experienced by a soldier. Sleep.
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Conrad, your final two posts are more 'Conradical" than the rest. Your army training is unique to you, and was obviously a challenge. These entries takes the reader through an experience of survival.
ReplyDeleteReconsider your wording in the last lines: To our joy around 1:00 - show us the joy rather than simply telling. What did you do? Jump up and down? Shout out?
- the most joyous moment that can be experienced - reword.
I don't think the word 'joyous' is an accurate choice here. I think rewarding or peaceful might be more fitting. I think soldiers experience joy when they triumph over obstacles or help others. Word choice is important to precise communication.
These last two blogs show improvement and effort. Well done. 85%
Thank you so much for sharing your positivity, intelligence, and good ethics with our group. May you continue to make the world a better place, as you did with our class! All the best!